Oh precious chystal your more brilliant, than all the stars in the sky , so tell me why're you worried about a fleck of dust Don't look back don't trouble yourself The dark nights I held you close ,were nothing after all, just grains of sand off a Soft pile of nothing not worth a passing glance , so you walk on by what you didn't realize was the pressure of this grains furtive existence gave me a transformation . you were affronted by my dainty posture While I was petrified , horrified of shattering the gem before me so I recoiled back into myself my abrasiveness would of shattered perfection so I swallowed it and got left behind I was left behind I was left behind So don't look back don't stress the only Remanent is a fleeting kiss of wind And a soft whimper Don't look back
I created this song to help a brother convey his feelings for his love he's in a long distance relationship I ask the community to convey whatever points you see in my song of metaphors a delicate flower can't b treated roughly as such I'll change this song based off of what I hear it's urgent he's heart broken pls help me help him
Your song is really sweet.But dont be down on yourself about your friend its not your fault and you done all you can to help.He just needs some time away from his ex girlfriend.Then once she has been around other guys and relized compared to how they treat her.That your friend wasnt such a bad person after all .Then she will appreciate him more now that she knows she had a good thing with him .and maybe she may try to get back with him after a break.Absence makes the heart grow fonder.