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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -DaveStrider-, Dec 1, 2011.

  1. I'm just looking for a few opinions on the short fanfic I wrote.....Thanks










    [Size] HAPPY HOLIDAYS!! [/Size]
     
    #1 -DaveStrider-, Dec 1, 2011
  2. darn.....size didnt work.....
     
    #2 -DaveStrider-, Dec 1, 2011
  3. I remember this from '7 Habits of Highly Effective Teens' (we have to read it in school). I like this version, however the one thing to work on could be spelling. (Lieutenant)
    Other then that, good job!

    ~Beriadanwen
     
    #3 Allioss, Dec 2, 2011
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