A poem for that one person...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iMaster, Apr 15, 2013.

  1. Singing for hundreds, singing for a few

    I won't do it, unless its just for you.

    Listening to your voice, calming me down

    Makes me want to always smile; never frown.

    I called you, twice a day, sometimes twice that

    Because talking to you is all I want do, thats a fact

    Can you please help me, find this girl again?

    I want to finally ask her to be more than friends,

    Because I didnt have the guts before, we've all been there

    Where your heart is torn, wanted to ask but being scared

    of the response, whether they'll say yes or no.

    Now I'm kicking my brain, saying "told ya so,

    "You should of asked her, while you still had the chance

    "Now she left you, shes gone, without a second glance."

    Can you find me this girl, the one with the blue eyes

    That sparkle and glow, makin me feel alright...

    The one with the blonde hair, long and flowing

    The one with the tan skin, smooth and glowing...

    Can anyone help me, anyone at all?

    Or is my heart doomed to just crash and fall

    To never love, to never feel happy again.

    Can you help me God? Thanks... Amen..

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    First shot writing a poem for the general public. Write feedback on the thread. I wrote this originally as a rap, but its kinda hard to show the rhyme scheme on a forum.
     
  2. I can see this as a rap, but as a poem it needs more rhyme.
     
  3. Poems don't need to rhyme.
    But that was nice.
     
  4. True, but I see his was rhyming sometimes then not the next time. Just my opinion. It's good nonetheless.
     
  5. Aw it's cute!