A New Beginning feed back

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Burningclaw, Apr 12, 2011.

  1. Feedback from my small story

    Ok a new Chap will come once a week depending how busy I am-.-

    Warning!!! Chap. Three is open for chars!!
     
  2. That was amazing nothing else to say...
     
  3. I like chapter 2 but y so many questions?