a love poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CALIFORNIA_SKATER_GIRL, Mar 30, 2011.

  1. when I see you my heart leaps
    when I am away from you my heart sleeps

    I need to calm myself down so I don't shout
    I need your love. Or i might pout

    Your eyes sparkle like stars on a clear night
    Let me be in shining armor as your knight
     
  2. Well better than I can write :)
     
  3. Nice poem :p
     
  4. Thx guys this is my first atempt EVER at a love poem
     
  5. O
    Like the sun you warm my heart
    Like the snow you bring change
    As the rains you are needed
    As the breeze you calm me
    So much as one bit of your love is worth a life time all I want is your hand

    I need you i hope you need me
     
  6. U guys think love poems are better in Ryne? tempo? Or just from da heart?
     
  7. JUst say how you feel. Unfortunate in real life, I suck at that. There's sorta shy and sensitive me on the inside, screaming to break free,but on the outside, it is a shell composed of 100% jerk/sadist/unsympathetic/meanie.
     
  8. Sorry for spamming, I was venting.
     
  9. To be ambitious, ruthless, kind. Yet nothing will waver me from my goal: but yet the one thing too much for me to handle, is you, the one too hard to brake, to good to take, To sweet to hate, to nice to bait, to kin to hurt, perfect to love. In your hands my heart will melt, with burning love of rose it smelt. Until another second takes, the purest stillest water wakes, then everything is back once more, a painful heart, a closed door.
     
  10. That was great! Bro 
     
  11. For years i have adminred you
    Sitting near the ocean too
    turning just to get a glance
    bending just for one last dance
    Adorning to my show
    Lovely is your glow
     
  12. How do you feel? Am I not real?
    I wish you'd adore me. Insted you just ignore me. I hope your not to tough. My heart just can't be treated so rough. Why do I persist? How can you resist?
     
  13. Does love at first site exsist? I did not belive so untill I met you. That first time I heard your beautiful name my heart jumped. The second I saw your face my heart leaped. Your voice is like angels all perfect and sweet. The second I left you My heart was deplete. Does love at first site exsist I belive so as I am in love that much I know I love you to the end.
     
  14. Pretty good better than me lol