A Game Of Secrets Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Jun 23, 2012.

  1. So. You can offer feedback on my story, A Game Of Secrets. Have fun, I guess...
     
  2. Someone seems kind of down.

    Essentially it's the same as before but I like that the emotions and sorts are revamped.
     
  3. I'll leave more elaborate feedback later but for now:

    I like it. :)
     
  4. Thanks everyone! I'm not down, per se, just unsure if I'll be active for long. I want to be, but I don't know... And that makes me sad. I guess I am sad. ;(
     
  5. Thanks everyone! I'm not down, per se, just unsure if I'll be active for long. I want to be, but I don't know... And that makes me sad. I guess I am sad. ;(
     
  6. Didn't mean to do that...
     
  7. I haven't read the whole thing yet but the revised version is even better than before!
     
  8. (; thanks, Stora! I really hoped it would be. I've only uploaded three chapters because the fourth wouldn't send... Plus, I'm too lazy to resend it...
     
  9. It's really awesum! Hope u continue!
     
  10. It's great so far.
     
  11. Love it!! PLEASE POST MORE
     
  12. When I saw that this had been commented on, I groaned. I knew you would make me get off my lazy butt and add more.

    Expect more tomorrow if nothing goes wrong.
     
  13. ik u have more done some on the oiginal, y didnt u just continue off that? :?: Because i really whanted you to finish when i read it 20r3monts ago :cry:
     
  14. Dang. I forgot to update;(

    I didn't add on to the original because this is the somewhat edited version.

    I WILL UPDATE TOMORROW
    I WILL UPDATE TOMORROW
    I WILL UPDATE TOMORROW
     
  15. A new chapter up! Enjoy!
    *** **** ** ***** ********.
    You... Don't want to enjoy?
    **, * ****.
    Well, fine! Don't then.
    ******* **, * ****. **** ****** ******* ** **** ********, ******.
    I'm not going to stop putting up chapters just because you hate the story!

    ****.
    Fine.
    ****!
    Fine!

    <can you figure out what the stranger is saying based off of the punctuation, number of letters, and my response?>
     
  16. Jade
    Gd story hope u continue!
     
  17. Love it love it love it LOVE ITPLEASE WRITE MOOOOOORE!!!!!!!
     
  18. Lady-Marian? Wow not much changed, I dunno if u remember me tho