A Footsoldier's Story Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 21, 2010.

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  1. #1 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 21, 2010
  2. Nice work, hidden. I'd like to see more.
     
    #2 *kleson (01), Nov 21, 2010
  3. I'll make some more tomorrow
     
    #3 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 21, 2010
  4. Good job... When it came to the chosen part I was thinking, huh? But.. Ya..
     
    #4 Smighter89, Nov 21, 2010
  5. Lol he said "I'm coming"

    Lol the dog's name is beaver.
     
    #5 *Gen_Spartan (01), Nov 21, 2010
  6. A new part of the story is out
     
    #6 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 22, 2010
  7. New part to the story... Pretty short but the next part will be extra long (that's what she said, just getting it out of the way)
     
    #7 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 22, 2010
  8. The next part is out! Check it out
     
    #8 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 24, 2010
  9. Nice! I can't wait for bootcamp! You know what would be really messed up? If he turned out to be the chosen one!
     
    #9 *lady-marian (01), Nov 24, 2010
  10. Don't worry, he won't
     
    #10 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 24, 2010
  11. Well that's good to know!;)
     
    #11 *lady-marian (01), Nov 24, 2010
  12. #12 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 24, 2010
  13. The newest part of the story got deleted in my notes 
     
    #13 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 25, 2010
  14. Bump. Sorry for no story in a while, I've been buisy with writers duel and other things
     
    #14 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 28, 2010
  15. Great name Hidden
     
    #15 kaw_admin, Nov 28, 2010
  16. A new part has been posted! Finally 
     
    #16 *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 28, 2010
  17. Bump
     
    #17 *Renamed23817 (01), Dec 16, 2010
  18. i lurv dir starray drude
     
    #18 Renatum, Dec 17, 2010
  19. i lurv dir staray durd
     
    #19 Renatum, Dec 17, 2010
  20. Good idea, but could do with maybe a different setting as everyone is going medival. Keep going though it's good work and for this chosen one stuff COULD IT BE BEAVER???
     
    #20 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 17, 2010
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