A Foot Print In the Sand Rates!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Sep 3, 2010.

  1. On this forum you can rate my done book A Foot Print In the Sand 
    rate it
     one star
     two stars
     three stars
     four stars
     or five stars!
    Rate!
     
  2.  it's a great story
     
  3. U kind of explain it all too quick
     
  4.  4 stars! I love it, But and editor is a nessity, I understand that your writing it on a non-scrolling iPod, and I sincerly think you should get a typing app, it really helps!
     
  5. No problem, just read your story and that is what I think!
     
  6. Tru I should look bak at it.
     
  7.  it was a good story, but it got confusing sometimes and there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. The plot was good, but when u die and come back to life kinda confused me. Also it was sorta short. And the other thing was that she wasn't even graduated from collage and she was getting married?

    It was confusing but good
     
  8.  4 stars,

    Try to take ur time typing. Ik u will still make mistakes, but it might look a little better.
     
  9. 5 stars,sweet heart!
     
  10.  four stars need to check your work after every sentence to check for spelling mistakes if you take care of that it would be  five stars
     
  11.  7 stars from me. Keep it up. I love it.
     
  12.  and 1 GOLDEN star!  :D And um, since this isnt published or anything, who cares about grammar! 
     
  13. 
    I've already stated my opinion but...
    The organization of the story was confusing. I believe in the beginning she was like 14 and at the end she was getting married.
    The description was over done and sounded forced, and the verb usage showed very little variety.
    The ending was whimsical and completely random and the grammar and spelling mistakes were atrocious.
    Just my two cents I'm not blinded by the twilightish tricks like a 14 year old 
     
  14.  5 stars x3 cuz of the great płot line i loves it!!!