A Foot Print In the Sand Fans! 

I myself haven't read it but I know a few ppl like it

 

I like it!

 

I give the story a thumbs up!

 

I love it

 

I love the book!!!!
it be creepy If people could come back from the dead thou :S
keep on writing!!!!

 

Rating:
Organization: F
Plot: A
Grammar: C
Punctuation: B
Choice of Words: B
Overall: B
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In my opinion, it's a great story

 

 DARK GET OUTTA HERE. SHE ASKED FOR F-A-N-S. Not reviews.

 

 Good luck Ari 

 

But it needs work. I myself prefer to read stories that are a no post thread. Then, for ratings use a feedback thread. It's annoying to have to scroll through just to read the next chapter. The plot is well thought out, but there is a few grammar mistakes. Also, there is a couple of places where you need to add punctuation. The story is good though!!

 

No she asked if we like it or not

 

 About 10 people said the exact same review you said in the "annoying reviews in the story page" as you called it. Why say it again? 

 

 And in asking if you liked it or not, does that mean review? No! Does that mean criticize? No! But anyway, Ari can say what she wants on her thread. 

 

That's why I put it here. I can't control other peoples actions, and I don't even read the posts by other people!!

 

*on the actual thread

 

*Sigh* Mkay, but maybe you should ask Ari if we can make a Feedback thread, this is a fans thread.  Sorry i got mean.

 

It's ok, I understand why.

 

;-)