It was a cold gloomy winters night and with a grey sky that hung over head many of the KSL army had given up! The ice cold rain fell not on them but on there arch enemy! There in two straight lines stood the two clans! This could mean only one thing WAR! SABBER TOOTH TIGER and his bestiary army signalled to the rest of the clan maits! The SABBERs road towards the grey coated armoured Enemy! The pikemen stumbled Backwoods towards the deadly spies positioned behind the army! Half their enemies army gone! Only the elementals remained! The tension rose as many sabbers fell to the floor! Enemy archers slowly picking of the KSL army! Then suddenly the dark elementals clicked their fingers and a terrible storm fell upon the KSL clan! The bestiary arm washed away! Only Charlie KSL Bronson and a couple of other brave and powerful members remained! Then Charlie KSL Bronson strode forth with his cavalry and slaughtered the many of the highly skilled long ranged archers! Meanwhile the other couple of members slowly began to stand tall! With there chests broad and chins up they briskly slid across the Blake ice towards the terrible elementals! One brave sole drew his golden sword from hi back and swung straight through the weak soldiers! The sword cracked as it neatly fell through the enemies elemental king.... The elemental king fell to the floor slowly! The sword fell from the KSL warriors hands as the young man turned to the group of cannons being positioned, aimed and fired! The Enemy soldiers aim was directed straight towards sir Charlie KSL Bronson! He reached into his back pocket and revealed a old pack of matches! He struck the match... The target locked and match struck it looked all over! The cannon flew across the battle field! Suddenly shadows flickered as the heavy weight crushed a chest, but who's? Bronsons sperm lay holding the cannon in his flakey pail hands! Remember me!! Promise me that! Remember remember.. Charlie KSL Bronsons world stoped as he sore before him a true and honored member that had saved his very own life! Now it was time he said! Charlie KSL Bronson flew from his members feet and drew his sword! MY FRIEND HAS DIED NOT JUST FOR ME BUT FOR THE SAME REASON WE ARE HERE F R E E D O M!!! The earth shook as Charlie charged throughout the many soldiers! Easily killing them all! But then the dark shadow like figure stood before him! The darkness fell a the man took to clean strong hits on Charlie, his sword flew from his grasp! "Any last words Charlie?" 4 blades hit the enemies head! "ONCE A KSL ALWAYS A KSL!! Miss me?"pronounced SABBER! TOGETHER SABRE AND CHARLIE KSL BRONSON BOTH CHARGED THROUGH THE BATTEL UNTIL SILENCE FELL UPON THE ICEY FIELDS! Around the land the KSL Flag is now hung proudly because they all remember the great war heroes! (NO KSL MEMBERS WERE HARMED IN THE PRODUCTION OF THIS Story!)
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