A crappy poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Imsoclever, Jan 25, 2013.

  1. Why oh why do they all hate me?

    I ponder this as I sit in my tree

    I cut my wrists and watch them bleed

    Why, oh why.. do they all hate me
     
  2. Sorry about the double thread
     
  3. It's ok about the double post, I understand.

    A bit of a short poem, but nonetheless good/ok.
     
  4. They're just jealous of your tree
     
  5. Thx for feedback. Was bored so I decided to write a poem
     
  6. Feed,.. more feedback
     
  7. Nice poem.
     
  8. Short. But not too bad :O