101st Airborne fan club and feed back

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Symphoney (01), Oct 22, 2010.

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  1. This is were the critics rate and I take,please rate if you can and give me ideas or tell me if I missed something
     
    #1 *Symphoney (01), Oct 22, 2010
  2. Your kinda all over the place on the first paragraph, try a bit more description , location as to where wolf and salvor are , why they were captured if they were captured...etc , but overall very interesting I will look forward to the rest. :D
     
    #2 *Mogwei (01), Oct 22, 2010
  3. Thanks!!
     
    #3 *Symphoney (01), Oct 22, 2010
  4. I think Korean soldiers should join the war and win :)
     
    #4 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 22, 2010
  5. Shhh,If you have pal I'll give you sneek peeks but right now pal is acting up
     
    #5 *Symphoney (01), Oct 22, 2010
  6. -_- How old are you?
     
    #6 *Gen_Spartan (01), Oct 23, 2010
  7. LOL!!!!!!
     
    #7 New_Name, Oct 23, 2010
  8. WERE R THE KOREANS IN DA BOOK
     
    #8 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 23, 2010
  9. YE FAN CLUB
     
    #9 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 23, 2010
  10. Do you realy need to know Gen?
     
    #10 *Symphoney (01), Oct 23, 2010
  11. There soon to come slim
     
    #11 *Symphoney (01), Oct 23, 2010
  12. AM I IN AIRBORN FAN CLUB I CAME UP WITH THE TITLE
     
    #12 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 23, 2010
  13. COOP
     
    #13 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 23, 2010
  14. cool*
     
    #14 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 23, 2010
  15. look I failed at this color
     
    #15 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 23, 2010
  16. yay good book
     
    #16 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 23, 2010
  17. colors
     
    #17 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 23, 2010
  18. Lol yeah your in it slim you see
     
    #18 *Symphoney (01), Oct 23, 2010
  19. YAY AIRBORN GO AIRBORN ALWAYS THE AIRBORN
     
    #19 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 24, 2010
  20. Lol 
     
    #20 *Symphoney (01), Oct 24, 2010
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