I felt blood on my face. I summoned a flame and hurled it at the man it exploded across his chest but he kept walking. I threw two more but still made no impression. He grabbed me by the neck and started punching me in the ribs. I lost my breath and was weak. I took out a blood stained knife that I had used before by stabbing him in the leg. Before he new it was lodged in his throat. He spat blood before keeling over on the floor. Finally... he was dead.
I was surrounded. No allies, no defense. I was going to die. Suddenly I heard a voice near my ear. "We are coming. Just stay alive for the next five minutes." Right after the message was over, a ninja lashed out with a kick. It hit me squarely in the knee and I fell to the ground with a cry of pain.
The men sorounded me and my friends, they struggled and struggled but no matter what, they could not win. Axz the leader of our clan smiled bravely and punched one of the men in the face and tore it off. Benath the skin there was only a tangled mess if wires. Axz desperatly tried to rip the wires out while the rest of the men surrounded him, leaving us to fight the bigger threat. Big mistake. "MOTHER FUCKERS DIE" he screamed horribly to the night sky and took out a detonator. "NO AXZ" we yelled but it was too late he pressed the detonator instantly killing him and the other robots. The last sound he uttered was a small laugh, happy he had died like a true warrior. Later in the night we scattered his ashes but no tears came out, too many were lost already. "We will avenge his death. FOR SPARTA!!" i yelled, and they answered with mourned yells and screams shaking their fists everywhere.
You could use more adjectives to discribe the fireball hitting him e.g The fireball exploded on his ripped shirt. Burning flames licked on the fabric, like a cat licks up it's milk. Suddenly it intesified, bright light shone into my eyes. Red flames curling off a shape and flying into the blackend smoke. Bits of discarded flames littered the air, touching my skin then burning it like skin on a oven. This was no ordinary fire. But surely that if this fire could have that effect, a bombardment like that should have killed him… Wouldn't it? But no, againist all odds his body fought through fire and flames. Not stopping to fuss about burns. I made off the top of my head
Off topic: Hey dill if you check this in the near future, I just got silenced! Will you plz tell the clan?