the fart that changed the world. Prologue

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -WoWcHiLd-, Jul 5, 2011.

  1. One day a man named bob farted in a nuclear waste plant. (He had eaten beans the night before). His gases mixed with the nuclear waste to make a living fart named Bill.

    *the main character*

    That same day Bill said randomly
    "I'm going to go on a life changing journey!"

    *The plot of the story*

    Then he tripped over a bug and smashed his cloudy face inward







    If you would like to have a full series reply your opinion
     
    #1 -WoWcHiLd-, Jul 5, 2011
  2. Well... It's... Original.

    Not series-worthy, though >.<
     
    #2 cheesemuffin, Jul 5, 2011
  3. Lol
     
    #3 -WoWcHiLd-, Jul 5, 2011
  4. It sucks.
     
    #4 FeatherHunter, Jul 5, 2011
  5. Uhhh no
     
    #5 *Utho (01), Jul 5, 2011
  6. No. It is put together wrong.
     
    #6 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Jul 5, 2011
  7. Here;

    Bob was an ordinary mentally retarded person, who one day, creeped in to a Nuclear Power Plant.
    As Bob had eaten beans the night before, he suddenly farted right on the spot. The fart was so strong that the gas from his ass crack mixed with fumes of Nuclear Gas.

    Which then, created an amazing thing. So awesome, it was unbelievable...
     
    #7 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Jul 5, 2011
  8. bump for ppl to see my better example
     
    #8 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Jul 5, 2011
  9. Lol
     
    #9 -WoWcHiLd-, Jul 5, 2011
  10. I know I suck
     
    #10 -WoWcHiLd-, Jul 5, 2011
  11. U need more inspiration
     
    #11 Storallelite, Jul 5, 2011
  12. This is sad
     
    #12 FeatherHunter, Jul 5, 2011
  13. Listen.
    Learn how to put certain sentences in defferent ways and use more "capturing" words.
    Get the reader to be drawn into the story.
     
    #13 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Jul 5, 2011
  14. :roll:
     
    #14 *sean24601 (01), Jul 5, 2011
  15. Ok…this is gonna fail
     
    #15 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 5, 2011
  16. if it was my version of prologue would it fail! :3
     
    #16 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Jul 5, 2011
  17. …Uh…not as much mech.
     
    #17 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 5, 2011
  18. lol.
    Thanks, even though its a joke.
     
    #18 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Jul 5, 2011
  19. Yah haha.
     
    #19 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 5, 2011
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