POEM

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by SPOT_the_Samurai, Oct 15, 2011.

  1. ...about depression.

    Why am I held in this cell?
    I threw myself down here
    Where did I throw the key?
    I know not though I fear
    I destroyed it never to let me out
    Though I did no wrong
    The prison to hide this plain facade
    Only shown through this song

    Occaisionally I'm allowed out
    Though only for a breath
    Soon I get dragged back in
    For a punishment like death
    When out I'm born anew
    The sun does rise again
    I hope I end my stint
    Soon so I can make a friend
     
  2. Please give feedback.
     
  3. Very good spot! :) Well put together. Of course it is a bit...umm....depressing? Lol 
     
  4. I am a noob and proud of it!