Fading Fast Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Oct 20, 2010.

  1. I felt really stupid today, thinking that my story was missing something... And then I remembered feedback. Feel free to make constructive criticism. I hope noone will be dissapointed in it.
     
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