Invisible Death feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CrayzJayz, Jan 22, 2011.

  1. A feedback thread for my story, Invisible Death. Only constructive criticism plz kthxbai
     
    #1 CrayzJayz, Jan 22, 2011
  2. Srsly, noone has anything to say? 
     
    #2 CrayzJayz, Jan 22, 2011
  3. My god poor Stuart Little
     
    #3 german_idiot, Jan 22, 2011
  4. Lol
     
    #4 CrayzJayz, Jan 22, 2011
  5. <_/\_> NOTE: sudden complications may delay the arrival of chapter one <_/\_>
     
    #5 CrayzJayz, Jan 22, 2011
  6. Plus I feel like playing halo reach right now
     
    #6 CrayzJayz, Jan 22, 2011
  7. I like your word choice, also prologue makes me wonder what's gonna happen next! Great post!
     
    #7 Storallelite, Jan 23, 2011
  8. Ty, ty. *bows*

    Lol, I played halo reach for 6 hours
     
    #8 CrayzJayz, Jan 23, 2011
  9. Woo hoo rats:)
     
    #9 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 23, 2011
  10. Very good, you really build up tension
     
    #10 Interrobang, Jan 23, 2011
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