Creatuires

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Irena, Jun 22, 2013.

  1. Hello. My name is Hailie. Many clans may know me and many may not. That doesn't matter here on fan fiction.  Why am I doing this? Because I am inspired by EndlessDesires53- and if my stories sounds similar to her's I do not take credit, but if they don't then I do take credit! This is my first time actually posting a fan fiction of mine and publishing a story. Sorry if you don't like my stories or grammar, but it's how I roleplay and what I roleplay in. For those of you that do like/love my stories, continue to post!

    (Introduction)
    A small little girl is walking in the dark. Where there is no one around, but there is someone watching over her. Someone. Who is it? The little girl has dark and purple eyes mixed with a little blue. She has long black and purple hair with blue highlights. It's ironic because she loves the color red. She isn't born with her favorite color. Some creatuires are lucky to be born with their favorite colors. It doesn't matter any way. This little girl has a very powerful power. She can control the dark, anything that has to deal with "the dark" for example, shadows, monsters, vampires, etc. She has the power to control them. There is something that's born in the dark and watching over her. Can she control whatever that thing is? No, it is too strong for her to handle its power. But what the hell is it!? She does not know. Whatever it is, is protecting her.

    (Part 1)
    The little girl is with her guardians. Her and her guardians lives in a kingdom, a kingdom to what us humans call "Heaven" it is beautiful and light. The little girl does not like the light. She hates it. She once almost killed he guardians at night because of how powerful the light is. The light weakens her. Her guardians sent her to a darker kingdom to what we call, "Hell." The creature is known as "The Devil" because that's what us humans named him. He trained her to control her dark powers and sent her to the human world.
    Ever since then, she's been going through so much trouble. She's had bullying issues, problems with the humans raising her, problems as a civil, etc. Everything in the human world was her problem. The biggest problem she ever had. How can she and will she deal with this? Whatever was watching over her, decided to come to the human world and pretend to be human. He fits well and adjusted well in the human world. Lucky him. Now we know the creature is a male, but who is he exactly and what kind of creature is he? They are both little kids according to the humans. The humans don't know what they are. The governemnt of United States haven't said anything nor did the Military people.

    (That's it for part 1, as this continues it will be more reality then fantasy, but again it is fiction.)
     
  2. Okay now time for part 2.. Got the ideas I want for part 2. Grammar may be slightly off. Hope this one good or better. 

    (Part 2)
    The girl's P.O.V

    I hate it in the human world. Why am I even in here? Uhg, I have no idea why I am here! Hopefully someone will tell me or I'll have to find out myself. These humans. What do they have that's better than my own kind? They call us allians to! What the hell! Okay! I got to calm down. I am going have to control myself and be prepared for when I meet my own kind. But how will I meet them? Okay, how do I adjust in this human world? What is with this school stuff? Hm, I should perhaps maybe travel around the world. At least that's what they call it. I pick up my bag as I am thinking to myself and walking in the hallways of my school. I walk around the courtyard, thinking of how big the humans made this school. Are all schools like this? I asked myself. Well, might as well find out. But how? I should try and meet some "people." That's what the humans call it now a days.
     
  3. hm..... interesting story you have there... was good actually :)
     
  4. Shut up Irena!

    I think its great for your first story!
     
  5. oh, Irena IS the author lol