 Time to die 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *The-Servant (01), May 23, 2012.

  1. I couldn't do it... I couldn't run anymore... I was panting and gasping for breath, leaning on trees for stability, but I could hear its ragged breaths and horrible cries right behind me. So I did what anyone else would have done. I stopped and screamed with my remaining breath, hoping there was someone -anyone- nearby that could help me. I slumped to the ground, out of breath and wheezing. I took from my pocket my phone, not enough power to call, not that there was any reception this deep in the forrest. I clicked it on and looked for the last time at the home page. Tears filled my eyes, and the phone died. I stood, and turned towards the thing chasing me, and spread my arms in defeat...
     
    #1 *The-Servant (01), May 23, 2012
  2. Ooh! Suspense!
     
    #2 FeatherHunter, May 23, 2012
  3. I can predict what's gonna happen next. The hero discovers their something special about them and then they defeat the monster or someone defeats it for them and takes them to a training place.
     
    #3 *PielordTy (01), May 23, 2012
  4. I just took a fat piss on this story. and that's more than it deserves
     
    #4 d_bo_assassin, May 23, 2012
  5. Hey servant, I can't see what garbo put but ignore him. He's full of hate, envy, jealousy, and ****.
     
    #5 FeatherHunter, May 23, 2012
  6. Gosh darn it lol. *but
     
    #6 FeatherHunter, May 23, 2012
  7. hey feather. you're still a douche bag. and you're not clever nor unique at all. you failed a long time ago
     
    #7 d_bo_assassin, May 23, 2012
  8. Didn't Feather "forum block" you?
     
    #8 cheesemuffin, May 23, 2012
  9. ^It only works when you're computer^
     
    #9 FeatherHunter, May 23, 2012
  10. I hate this keyboard on this iPad. Way to big and easy to miss letters.

    *on computer
     
    #10 FeatherHunter, May 23, 2012
  11. Then use your 3 and a half inch other iDevice screen.

    Dumbass.
     
    #11 Interrobang, May 23, 2012
  12. Are you gonna finish this?
     
    #12 FeatherHunter, May 31, 2012
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