Terran Empire

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Lara_Croft, Aug 17, 2011.

  1. The Terran Empire


    Long ago... a star empire vanished into the air... 10.000 years later in 2920 the Terran USC (United Space Command) discovered an ancient Star Destroyer... It was floating near an old wormhole.
    It was an ancient XENON K-Class Mothership. The Central Mainframe of the ship was deactivated and 10 years later the USC was able get the ship into working condition.
    We discovered technology beyond all imagination.
    This technology made the humans able to build an Empire bigger then any Civilization ever seen.
    It was a golden age of Science, Culture and prosperity.
    We ruled the Stars... for 100.000 years...

    The XENON, the destroyers of empires, returned, but the TE starfleed is ready to crush them.


    To be continued...
    What do you think about it? Its short i know lol
     
  2. It's good but is this like third person or something?
     
  3. It sounds kewl, but fix the grammar a little bit.

    Other than that, it sounds great!