So hey guys... I just wanna get some feed back on a song ive written for my girlfriend for her birthday.. Its tomorrow and i need to know if this is good or no so i can change up the lyrics a bit early thanks! Forever and Always by Me :3 Verse 1: I wake up in the morning Shes the first thing that i see She shines like the sunlight That brightens up my day And as i move closer I feel the beating of her heart Telling me dont leave me Cause i need you in my life Chorus: Baby i'll be here, forever and always By your side through the good and the ugly And baby you'll be here, forever and always In my heart.. Verse 2: Throughout my whole life I have never felt this way To feel like theres someone Who's always there for me The time you came to me Was the best time of my life Cause girl you have changed me And brough light to my life (repeat chorus 1x) The End Well that pretty much it! thanks for reading, please dont troll, i just need some feedback of how it looks
I wouldn't suggest going on forums for this type of thing since you will likely get trilled but either way good song.
Its an acoustic song so the beat would be : down down up up down up down up down down up up and just keep repeating it
Wow that's awesome nice job there mate you made moose cry it's hard to make a guy cry xD ain't it moose
Wow gave me a tear just sang it lol and my misses heard it now she's crying xD and our baby heard it to she's kicking her >:3