Love Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *BubbleCake- (01), Dec 30, 2011.

  1. Amy was looking around for her class.It was confusing because it didn't say the number of the class-room.She was blonde,has bangs,blue eyes,and was 17.She looked around nervously until she bumped a guy.She looked up and saw he had brown hair and brown eyes.

    "Uhm..I'm really sorry."Amy said guilty.

    "It's okay.I'm supposed to be the one who's saying sorry."Amy laughed softly and the guy joined her.
    "By the way,I'm Joshua Williams."

    "Amy Clare Xander."Amy answered still guilty.

    There was a silence between so Joshua spoke up.

    "So..You looking for your class?"

    "Pretty much."Amy looked around for her class.

    "Do you know your class number?"
    Joshua was guilty too.Amy was still looking around for her class.

    "Nope.Doesn't say it on my paper."Amy said looking at her paper that said the information about her school and about her.Joshua leaned in and took a look at the paper.

    "Hm.."Joshua was looking around the paper for Amy's class number.

    "Aren't you supposed to be in class?"Amy asked looking at Joshua.

    "Got a hall pass."Joshua said showing the hall pass.

    "Oh.."

    They looked around until they saw a room with painted flowers on the door.
    Joshua and Amy looked at each other happily.
    "Must be your class-room."Joshua was disappointed because he wanted Amy to be in the same class.Amy walked to go to her class-room,but turned back around.

    "Well,bye."She said waving disappointed.

    "Bye."Joshua waved to her as he went to class.

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    Amy went to class sadly.The teacher,Mrs.Byrd was a little bit angry.

    "You must be Ms.Xander!"Mrs.Byrd said looking at Amy disappointedly.Amy nodded and sat down next to a guy.

    "Why are you late,Ms.Xander?"asked Mrs.Byrd angrily.

    "I tried looking for the number of my class,but I didn't find the number,so someone helped me find my class,and we found it."Amy said telling the story happily.

    "Good story Ms Xander.But you will be attending detention!"Mrs.Byrd yelled at Amy.Amy was disappointed again and everybody laughed so hard their faces were turning red!A girl was laughing that she said,"Yeah,good story Ms.Xander."And the girl kept on laughing until Mrs.Byrd yelled at the class.
    "Enough class!"She yelled practically.
    Everybody stopped laughing and looked at Mrs.Byrd.She looked at the girl that was saying something to Amy.

    "Ms.Griffin,you will be attending detention too."Mrs Byrd was angry that she was about to explode!

    RING!!
    The bell rang and everybody ran out of class.Amy walked out sadly until Mrs.Byrd called for Amy.

    "Ms.Xander!"She was pointing her finger at Amy."Come here please."
    Amy went and Mrs.Byrd said something into her ear.
    "I don't want you to get in anymore trouble,okay?"She said putting down her glasses.

    "Yes,Mrs.Byrd."Amy said frequently.

    "Okay.Now go chat woth your friends."Mrs.Byrd pointed her finger to the door,and Amy went to lunch.
     
  2. It's good, but my teachers tell ME^ to show the responder and don't tell try describing using adjectives rather than explaining through the characters thoughts 
     
  3. I Love Itt! 
     
  4. Thnx..
    I spent all this mins to make this story.Go to sign ups for this and sign up plz
     
  5. Overall, I think it's a good story
     
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    This story is so GOOD!!!


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  7. Actually...

    You said

    Amy said frequently

    That means a lot or most of the time...

    Just saying.
     
  8. Amy went to lunch happily.Joshua saw her get lunch.A girl named Ashley Brunette was insulting her.She was with a bunch of cool girls.

    "Oh look.It's the Xander girl that likes to get into trouble!"The girls laughed especially Ashley.

    "Leave me alone!"Amy tried to stand up but the girls guarded her.Joshua saw Amy into trouble by Ashley,his girlfriend.He ran to where his girlfriend was.

    "Ashley!"Joshua stopped Ashley from insulting Amy more.He looked at Ashley angrily.

    "What?!You just stopped me from insulting her!"Ashley was angry."Come on girls!Let's go to our table."Ashley looked at Amy one more time angrily.She walked away and the girls followed her.Joshua looked at Amy in the eyes.

    "Amy,are you okay?"Joshua sat next to Amy.She looked at him sadly.

    "Not really."Amy was about to cry when Ashley came by again.She whispered something in Amy's ear.

    "Stay away from my boyfriend."Ashley walked away to her table again and looked at Amy from the distance.Joshua looked at Amy,and she looked at him.She was crying and Joshua was disappointed.

    "Look Amy,I have to go.You going to be okay?"Joshua asked disappointedly.

    "Why wouldn't I be?"Amy answered with passion.

    "See ya later."Joshua stood up and went to his table.Amy wiped her tears and threw away her trash.
     
  9. Lol when I said Amy brunette I ment her name is Amy and her hair is brown
     
  10. I really like the second part
     
  11. Thnx.but sorry it was short.I'll write longer tomorrow.



    maybe
     
  12. Yeah, it's pretty good
     
  13. After school was great.Not so great.It might have been horrible.Amy and the girls met after school.

    "Well well well.I've heard you've been dating my boyfriend."Ashley said walking around Amy.

    "What?What are you talking about?"Amy asked nervously.She was confused about what Ashley was talking about.

    "Don't play with me.I know you and Joshua are dating!"Ashley sat on a bench carefully.

    "Dating?!We're not dating!We're just friends!"Amy exclaimed walking away from the girls,but they grabbed Amy's arms.
    "Let me go!"Amy tried to break free but there were too many girls grabbing her arms.

    "I said let me go!!"Amy screamed louder."Look!Whatever your name is.I'm not dating your boyfriend!He's just my friend!"

    "Yeah right.Like I'm going to believe you."Ashley was angry.Joshua was supposed to be Ashley's boyfriend,not Amy's.

    "You have to believe me!Please!"Amy begged.Ashley was disappointed,but she wasn't going to let Amy break their relationship between her and Joshua.
    "I'm never going to believe you."Ashley stood up and said something to a girl's ear.The girl was familiar to Amy!

    "Are you the girl that is attending detention?"Amy asked afraidly.The girl looked at Amy.

    "Yes.Yes I am."The girl said walking up to Amy.

    "Why are you working for her?"Amy asked looking at Ashley.

    "Ashley and I got a deal.I get rid of you from Joshua.And she gets me a make-over."The girl said sitting down on the bench.

    "What's so great about make-overs?!"Amy asked confusingly trying to break free from the girls.

    "It's not just a make-over.It's a clothing change."The girl said raising up an eyebrow.Amy looked at the girl and raises up an eyebrow too.

    "What?That's just messed up!"Amy was angry.

    "Britney,take care of her please."Ashley walked away to go home,and Britney and the girls took care of Amy.She was stil trying to break free
     
  14. Ur a great writer
     
  15. Thnx..


    Can I do it tomorrow?I need to get some rest
     
  16. Of Coarse Goodnight! Sweetdreams!
     
  17. Thnxbye