War if Eden

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lgost (01), May 7, 2012.

  1. It was a beautiful evening. Athena was singing, Zeus was happy and Poseidon was letting soft waves poor on to the beach. Best of all- The Children of the faeries were "frolicking" as Aphrodite would probably say. But strangely not many humans were out and being productive in the Creation. Zeus became unhappy. "I GAVE THESE MORTALS FIRE, I WAS THE ONE THAT GAVE THEM LIFE!!! He was the one that create their hole world. He wanted to destroy them.
     
  2. As you can imagine Hades was very happy of this. Hades tried to convince Zeus to destroy the world so that he could collect on the soles. Poseidon didn't want to please his younger brother so he went to talk to Zeus and convince him to reconsider His thoughts. Zeus thought and thought about this.
     
  3. Welcome to forums :D

    lgost

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  4. Oh. Yay. Greek mythology!
     
  5. welcome to a herp derp moment
     
  6. Just letting ya know, Prometheus gave them fire. He was chained to a rock, made immortal, and picked apart by ravens as a result.

    Just sayin'.
     
  7. So wait humans become fat and lazy and Zeus is all like oh hell no but poseidons like no that will help jaded and make me jealous don't do it.
     
  8. Terrible.

    You clearly know nothing about Greek Mythology or by the looks of it; spelling.
     
  9. Spelling. And homophones.
     
  10. Mythology fan
     
  11. Ok to all the people that are calling me a noob and criticizing my story in sorry that im not obsessed with Greek mythology
     
  12. Zeus eventually decided that Poseidon, Damn him, was correct. Zeus became mad at hades. Hades was god of Hell. Zeus confronted hades about his mind games.
    "Brother," said Zeus "you have tried to deceive me an the human race, for this act of treason I cast you into a thousand year slumber in the darkest depths of Hell. Where you will be forced to listen to nothing but Justin Beiber and do nothing but play Angry Bird on you itouch, without the Mighty Eagle!"
     
  13. I'm finding it amusing that you're still trying to continue writing this dumb story
     
  14. -facepalm-

    Yet you continue and also continue to get your mythology facts wrong.

    Hell is something fabricated by Christians.
    The Greeks came several thousands of years before Jesus has rumoured to be born.

    Hades is the God of the Underworld.
     
  15. I understand that you're not obsessed with mythology, but you could at least try to get your facts straight.
     
  16. Also, if the Underworld is his realm, why would it be such a huge punishment to be confined there?
     
  17. Wow greatest story ever. For a 3 year old.
     
  18. Athena sings???