Separate names with a comma.
At least he tries…he did good
i umderstand that, Plane
Ok?
Thanks of Angel
Sounds good
No, I am not.Thanks I will work on it, should I post the next chapter though?
Poem is really good!ツthe only thing that seemed off was the repetiotion but having a melody in ir head does effect writting so…Good job
Those are good
I thought you were good,though mayb less ****?
If it had a rhyme scheme itd b better,but it is still good
I see what you are saying, there is a huge difference.
Wow,you're an awesome writer,good advice too.Keep writing!ツ
thanks for advice,and yes I am aware of the spellinh problems,but most of it is due to the fact that I can not easily see my keyboard and screen
Other people in the room.A girl with short,black pixie like hair with green hughlights.She sat with her arms crossed,and kinda slouching.She...
"Um,how do you feel?"Andrew asked as if I had a cold.I knew it shouldn't,but he really annoyed me with all his talking.When he talks his voice...
Ok thanks,I guess I did not put enough space fir paragraphs though I intended to…
Its not whole chapter
Keep going?
I woke up in a daze.The last thing I remembered was a house.I had climbed through a window into a house,but I could not remember why.My head...
Thts awesome