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Yay! More poets!! :3 Keep up the good work.
I encourage you to write more poems. However, it was confusing and over simplistic. Work on that and you should be fine! I like the raw emotion...
NOT BASYA!!! WHY?! WHY!!!!!!!
I demand more!
Y u no write more?! XD
Hello....O_o
NEVAH!!!! :D
Omg. I see a me reference! -beams with pride- xD
*forever bump*
-sobs- SO BEAUTIFUL!!! Where's the freaking tissue when you need it? >_>
Bump. ^.^
Reminds me of my grandfather. This brought tears to my eyes, because it reminded me of him so. Well done!
Well written, good rhyming. My constructive critisim: Its great to write a simple poem once in a while. However, in my opinion, the best poetry...
*is disturbed by your poem* O_o
I liked the second. The first was graphic, even for me. O_O The second however, was well balanced and very creative.
Well done! I don't really have any critiques. :3
Thanks! :D
Sorry I don't mean to be annoying, but you spelt regarding as 'regaurding'. O.O
I mean Im definitely not a pro, but I would love to help regardless. :3
Sure innocent injustice! :D