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Can u hurry up and post more stories??
Ok just some critism. You sometimes switch from present to past tense. Occasionaly overuse words, eg in chapter 2 you used the word chip....
Btw it's me kawlawd.
Aww i wanted to be 100th lol
Yay I thought so. Feel free to use the name Zack however you like.
Oh oh oh I know a name. Zack Lehi Jared Joseph Abram
Awesome job dude, just wondering if my character comes bak in it. It's weird because that fella said don't go through the portal, and bastion said...
Awsome!! I'm your best freind.
Name: Cain age: 19 element : fire weapon: fire Trident class: Mage
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Noooooo I am so sorry zaln sooooo sorry, I just hit my head once for every letter that was on the story I'm so sorry please forgive. Ahhhhhhhj
Re: "The War For Power" Endorsed by iEnterprises™ Also he is very strong, don't underestimate the physical strength of this old guy, working with...
Nice I like it name: Randall age: 68 element: Earth, very wise man. Has been in many wars, a legend amongst his own people. His favourite move...
Wakes his son up, son I need your help, we are going to make a fine suit of armour and a powerfull sword. Goes back, first things first, makes the...
Goes back to the village grabs his horse and wagon and brings it back to the crater. Loads the wagon with the ore and takes it back to his...
Sees a big piece of asteroid rock, starts inspecting it.......... it's ore. Thinks to himself if this rock could survive that impact, whAt a...
Btw I'm kinghavoc forgot I reset but I'm the 37 yr old blacksmith guy.
Goes to inspect the asteroid, or what is left of it.
A big boom is herd across the village.
Sees a flashing asteroid falling from the sky.