Separate names with a comma.
:cry: Microsoft Word has disappeared off my computer O_o so i'm unable to access my document to update my story. Sometime in the future hopefully .-.
Also, I got a solid 80%, mostly docked off for sentence fragments and other stuff actual athors get away with :D
bump
Also, someone read my short story! Jeez people! Prime material right there. I bumped it.
:lol: I haven't(as you all I'm sure noticed) been actively updating my story. I know you're all terribly broken up about this, and I am too....
I'm still reading it! It's admittedly a bit confusing the way the viewpoint of the reader jumps around, and the paragraphs seem a little too...
i'm a bit confused, when clover goes back in time is she actually in her past body, or in a ghost version of herself watching past events?
NEVER!!! i posted a new short story i wrote for a school project. it had to be around 1500 words, so i made it exactly that:D it's titled 'To...
I had to, for a school project, write a short story consisting of around 1500 words and no longer than three pages. So I wrote this story, exactly...
YAAYY!! wait.. is three alot? :|
soo much feedback. okay, uh. here we go grammar things - thanks i'll get on them. i'm likely going to change it to first person so i might just...
cheese, i think that may be the most awkwardly beautiful compliment you've ever given. lol and iris, very well done! i personally didn't notice...
very curious to see where this goes, and well written! good job
@Skyler_the_NeoKnight well, i read what's there of frayed, it seems pretty well written so far, and interesting enough, i just so far don't see...
well screw you guys too, its not like i made a feedback thread specifically for comments or anything.
Uh, no there's not O_o if there is, it's unintentional, i haven't read it.. I'll be writing more later today though
bump cuz i updated
that being said, i added more
chapter two part two is up! it was going to be chapter three, but they both felt short. so bam. the new part starts after the stars
i'm writing really slowly and am behind on reading all the stories(sorry :cry: ) cuz i got skyrim a few weeks back. soon as i beat it i'll speed up:3