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I really enjoyed it! Ready for the second part. If you would, please read mine: The Hunter. I'd love to hear your feedback. Author-to-author. Of...
Let me know what you think! But, please, be nice. Or at least gentle with the criticizing :)
The Hunter From the brush he watched them, observing their every move. The hunter was ready. He was hungry for blood. He watched, and waited for...
A simple short story I wrote, it's on Wattpad.com if you have that, along with a few other small things. I'll make a discussion thread to go along...
I greatly enjoyed reading it! Very suspenseful! I am curious to see how you will lead into the second chapter :)