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I like ur type of style. Keep it up.
As u can see, I read and reply constantly. I'd have to say that the story started out strong, but then the main idea slowly got weaker. It's still...
Love the new chapter. P.S. Yes, I was reading the right thing. Please post another one be4 I actually cry.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I almost cried when I finished the last one. Keep it up and great job.