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So this is how it all started... KotFEBF
This is not to be mean but you can definitely tell you are a first time writer (the writer of this piece) however you are better than most first...
Everything is happening to fast in here, absolutely no description or emotion coming through that would hook the reader. Sorry, but that's plain...
Everyone got mad and the whole universe blew up.... THE END
I'm half tempted to enroll but my writing is slowly going down the drain... And looking through ALL of the pages I see that the teachers aren't...
Great now I'm going to be writing this down to confuse my friends... Thanks
@Beriadanwen I know... I noticed the grammar errors after I posted it. It had been sitting in my notes on my iPod for the longest time and I just...
Dew drops fell from trees in the early morning sun, captivating each one into a tiny diamond... As I ran throughout the forest, animals started...
Wow! Long long time ago...
Wow! Long time ago! Wasn't even playing this game then... Though I see I don't really recognize any of the KotFE people....
Sounds interesting... But if we do kill, could we like, emphasize on the blood and pain were inflicting? You know as long as it doesn't become...
Sorry it's kind of small... But this is all I could get out
Chapter 6: On the way to the final destination, as some called it, I was actively engaging in any conversation possible with the leaders....
Though even with Karl/ Shock forever living in the books, I have chosen to have him be killed in the books, as I do not want anything to interfere...
At the time I didn't know how to post a thread and so this has been left in the dust.... Please keep commenting to keep this towards the front for...
At the time I didn't know how to make a thread, so please post comments when you want to keep this towards the front :)
Karl, you will forever live in the books no matter what happens....
chapter 5 Chapter 5: The conversation of Death and Monk had convinced Monk to stay. Despite his bitterness to being controlled by others, he...
4th chapter of unnamed book Chapter 4: There was absolutely nothing exciting that happened to getting to our next check point. Though we did...
Re: Chapter 3 of unnamed book Chapter 3: When we were finally dry we got an earful from Greenie. I swear by the end I think she lost her...