Separate names with a comma.
What...
This use to be a feature...
If you could elaborate on why you dislike my writing it would help.
My last post was centered around people's opinions and thoughts on my writing, I took them all into consideration whilst renewing the letter. A...
I can stand by this philosophy, no matter how heartless it seems.
Thank you ^~^
I guess just to see how well the letter was actually writen, and I have gained a bunch of insight from doing so. I wasn't too worried on people...
Also remember that the context of this letter is apart of a much larger story, I see what you mean with how it just repeats things un-neededly,...
Always the best part! And to Ninetails, thank you. I have tried to find some websites like this, but most of them are fan fiction central. Would...
Would you rather someone just asking it blatantly? I did this So that you could send a his desperation and how much it actually mattered to him...
I thank you all for your inputs ^~^ I do understand the lack of paragraphs, I had it separated and it looked much better than it does now, though...
Fair enough.
If I may go back to this, why is it terrible, precisely that is.
If I may ask, what do you not like about it?
I have made this letter to the best of my liking, I do not wish to change it. However, I can change my writing based on what you say about this...
I am not upset, I posted it because I wanted to see what people had to say about it, good or bad.
As expected from any forum.
Well, the spaces did not save. Either way, if you would like more context into this letter, since it is apart of a much larger story I am working...
Hallo /) I would like to share my writing and to have you, the lerkers of the forums, to criticize it. I may regret asking this of you, but do not...
Has anyone here tried the Steam OS? It seems like a cool idea...