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Sorry guys I don't really go on here anymore so I'm afraid I will not continue to post the story. Good day.
I know you have all been dying for it, so here's the next chapter.
Chapter 18 Lailahs P.O.V. I stood with shaking legs, the Morges around me in their hundreds doing the same. I surveyed them, and it really...
Yet, you said 'I doubt you even have any readers'. Well, aren't you a reader?
You guys I'll post some more in about 12 hours. I'm just leaving for school right now so I can't at the moment.
*that you have
Funny you should say that, angel...isn't it you who has been feedbacking, saying to post more? Forgive me if I'm wrong, but that means that have...
And no, angel, I can't do that, because then I would lose all of my wonderful readers :)
Yep same, I always start a story, do about 5 chapters and then regret it.
It's all pre-written, so it definitely is finished! I'm just trying to space out the chapters a little bit.
Oh okay! Well welcome back, good to see your name around again.
All sounding good. I'm not going to lie, it doesn't really seem like my kind of book because I'm not a big fan of 'spin offs' - if you will - of...
Hey iP (your new nickname) how's life? Haven't seen you around lately!
I'm so sorry Smighter :( thoughts are with you and his family
Can you guys please check out A Changing Personality? Would love some more feedback.
Yeah I get what you mean. And if I were writing a description about a female character, I most probably wouldn't write it in the way that a...
Yeah I know I get it all the time. Yep girls do seem more emotive than guys, weirdly enough.
I'm sorry angel, I'm afraid I'm not following. Hey flamingtomato. Well, I'm a girl and I love the old soppy romance books, so I really wanted to...
Chapter 17 Lailahs P.O.V. Suddenly, I realised what we were doing. Angrily, I shoved Blakes chest hard, and he tumbled off of me, and onto...
Look, I'm not going to discuss this with you here. This thread is for feedback on my story ONLY. I will unblock you but I am not going to refollow...