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Dude, this isnt supposed to be a new york best seller. It's just a dude whos writing stuff down to make a simple story to see what they say.
So?
It's fine, but it's really good
Wow, intense.
It should be called apocalypse
About six foot, slightly brown skin, and a couple of scars, one running through his right eye from the eyebrow to the cheek bone
Yeah, it's pretty good
Sean Conwaer 14 Blonde and blue eyes Plays sports and is Irish
An empty hall, A ringing bell, Laughter fills the air. As all settles down, There is not a sound, In the hall of the wisest place. What do y'all...
And is christian
Sean, 14, light brown hair, blue eyes, likes sports.
Overall, I think it's a good story