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FEATHER SORRY I WAS GONE FOR SO LONG D:, but anyways, anytime i read ur story I can't imagine it getting better, but it does. I am intrigued and...
Jay, idk y u r getting so much hate on chapter 2. I LOVE IT. the entire set up of the story, character development, details, everything is...
Set up is perfect in my opinion, obviously well thought out :3 and as for the title lol I never think much of titles, but for the characters, u r...
I think your characters r great how they r and u may add more detail as u plz but I don't think that it is needed, and none in particular
Feather, I am absolutely ooozing with anticipation over this chapter, and the next, and the next. Believe it or not, this is one of the best...
Hmm... Idk but I think he may go on some kind of quest to regain the memories. Or something else. Lol idk
I think it's perfect ^_^
Feather I looovveee it. Its so mysteriiiiiouuusss. :3 and btw thank u soo much for putting me in the story, u didn't have to do that ^.^ great job...
Noob moment :3
Lol sorry I thought it didn't send the first time
Got dammit
I must have read some stuff wrong sorry! Cut me some slack it's 3:00 in the morning lol.. But yea oooh it sounds soooo good :3 EEEP I can't wait!!! :D
Hehe lol sorry I must have read some things wrong cut me some slack it's like 3:00 in the morning! But oooh I love it so far :3
I love the story summary! Thank u soo much for putting me in it! That was so nice of u ^.^ but yea the story sounds absolutely fantastic so far, I...
FEATHER I LOVED IT. I love how u make it so its both somewhat serious and funny, with the complaining about the shoes :-) thnx for incorporating...
Ys every1 hating on feather >.<
Lol well this kinda failed
1200 pages :-O
Lol yea that's what I ment when I explained it, feather got the format right
I thought I did give a format? I guess I failed. Lol