Separate names with a comma.
Because Ion seems evil but awesome too
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The one thing I would say is to make you've got periods at the ends of your dialogue. And I feel terrible for loving Ion.
:3 thank you Okami!
I would enjoy more Wolf Sabre :3
Chapter 20 posted. Sorry for the delay, I'm being lazy. And accidental double post :/
Chapter Twenty "Okay, hold up a second." Geoff stopped Alice from continuing. "What is it this time, Geoff?" Alice rolled her eyes. Taking one...
You got me all excited when you bumped it
Name: Alex(andra) Goaters Gender: Female Age: 13 Personality: Creative and imaginative, but very socially awkward (._.) Looks: 5 feet 6 inches...
I just rediscovered the first story I ever wrote. So many errors. Oh Spragga why did I do that.
Someone...pleased...Cheese... HURRY AND WRITE MORE BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE
I recommend that you read Gloomi's Guide to Writing. And by the way, people don't actually say "ur". They say "you're".
CMS?
iZaln sighting!
Where's Feather when we actually need him to flip out on people?! xD Loved the chapter! Gah more please? Please?
"Alison's mom went in to the kitchen, while Alison went to the bathroom." And...why would it matter if there's a house next to her's? People...
I think #1 would be interesting.
Uh...why was there a random guy in her house...outside the bathroom...? :S
Yay! New chapter! Awesome as always :)