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I hate people who mistreat mods
I'm starting to think that there's a mod curse. After a player becomes mod they seem to fall inactive quick...or at least forum inactive...
Don't worry about it, just keep writing and take advice so you'll get better :)
Sounds interesting, it's title reminds of another book. Try putting in a space once in awhile so the text isn't all bunched together. Ex. Hi, I...
Idk, haven't paid much attention
Then I'll write the next chapter, and we continue as before.
BTW paradox, if you're not staying then that's the end of FTLOC.
PARADOX!!!!!!!....YOU...YOU...YOU...Urgh....!!!!!!
it was out of the blue
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yup :)
but he's not posting :cry:
though...checking his status(i'm on PC) he was on the forums recently...
agreed. But unfortunately...Paradox quit....
Pretty good. A suggestion: Try not to mix past and present POV's too much. It can get the readers confused.
Sounds interesting but I think it needs a few more details.
Eh...
Great description, this has piqued my interest :)
Amazing chapter. But kinda freaky
SETH!!!!!