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@Irin That's what she said . Sorry couldn't resist the urge haha. iZaln
Uhh just read my response in the old one then lol... iZaln
Whew... Long title. Haha nice job. Maybe a light spacing in-between paragraphs. Like... Shadows leapt around the place in search of Roxas. "We...
Wait! I will just to make you fall xD! iZ
@Irin No ones a perfect writer lol. Everybody has those days, nobody's perfect, I've gotta work it... Yeah lol no more Hannah Montana for me......
Eh that chapter doesn't have the same feel as the others do lol. But maybe that's just me. iZ
Ah thanks lol. Took two days worth o time... Gosh I'm getting rusty lol. iZaln
Ack it's Iririririn! Haha Sup? iZaln
Haha Utho, you never cease to humor me xD iZaln
@iPim Haha wattpad is kinda nice. iZaln
Yeah, different viewpoints. So something's happening here, another there. iZ
Gosh... By making two viewpoints it makes the chapter seem longer than they are T.T iZ
The finish writing and post xP iZaln
Postin on WattPad you traitor! Lol jkjk I'm using it too haha. iZaln
Well with her feedback thread, it'll push out pointless threads. Writers can update and stories are up again. Lol iZaln
It's best that you make a feedback thread. Whether readers like it or not, you're free to write it, so if you have an idea, go all the way with it...
A muffin confused?! Unheard of! iZaln
@RoxasLoverForever Such a supportive sister xD iZaln
@Ichigo Don't mess with iPimella, FeatherHunter, and QueenBayleen or you're in some big shizz. @Bella Great story. Great concept. You spelled the...
...More? Please. I said please. I demand a chapter because I said please. Now post a chapter, I demanded it with a please. Since I've commanded...