Separate names with a comma.
That's the point, your reader isn't going to know you, you've got to put yourself across so you make them "think" they know you.
Oh and no matter how much **** you've been through, there's someone that's been through more, remember that.
There not you though are they? I didn't get 1 subtle charactistic o you in a novel apart from your, too formal-ness. That's not you is it....
A way to kill time isn't productive, you were never goin' to be a good writter if you dent even like doing it. (sorry but I had to reply) :)
Your too stubborn conq, keep them & the best stories are mainly ones based on real life or a character you can relate to because it shows the...
you asked for feedback, you can't quit what you "love" everytime someone gives a bad review, you take it on board & change your mistakes.
I agree with whoever said it was slow, it's ever so dull, there is hints of a good writter, but your too repetative & your vocabulary is a little...
Go play FC, lol You can farm all you like
Just hit back, there only pixels it's not like there gunna show up at your house in a suite & say "your now on my list" in a terminator voice
Lol your angry at me? For what jas did & he only did that? WOW
Jas has a point why you taking what he did out on me & getting Laboa to farm me :) & lol nice reply btw! But still WTF dd I do? Jeez & what did...
Have you lost you're manners?
Um Zachary if u haven't noticed all David did was copyright it, which means no one else can use it, calm down & yeah I think he noticed no need to...
Copyright of DingDong productions 1997 & I'm apologize for Jasper Zack, I'll add more to the story
Its because ypu have become stronger and im guessing th the osf was weaker than you
I thought that when i posted it... Maybe just will players that the Dev's reset as that isn't fixed or at least I hope it isn't
Yeah but nat, when they reset, it isn't the owners fault so they should get a higher money back, even when the Devs reset them, let's say at my...
for guide & for gettin my name right (second time round)
1 considering the information hasn't been passed yet it hasn't been stckied
Noobs not boobs