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YAY! Way to go star! :)
looks like we got ourselves a pet..... He can't stay away! lol
ANGELS!!!!!!!! lol :)
poor Irin..(the character) but nice post :)
nice :) but you're leaving us hanging!! :(
great chapter
np :)
nice chapter, i like how to main character doesn't like pink! 8-)
not bad but there's the part where it says quote: "Four women, one of them's eyes glowing green..." You should change it to: Four women, one had...
"Yay!" Stora yells and runs out the cafe door as fast as possible before Reg can change her back into a hamstermuffin.
YAY!!!!!! It's kinda like a poem this chapter, how it repeats(like the last chapter too)
Yay Irin ur back!
Lol thanks ordo *I noticed some typo's so I'll go fix that asap*
-out- Ah ok, that's cool -in- Stora notices Riddle looking at her oddly. Realizing Riddle might eat her, Stora tries to jump out the cafe door but...
Rather mysterious. I like that. Nice descriptions too.
-out- Congrats Star!!! @Sam Are you jumping from third person to first person?(alternating each chapter) Because it sorta seems that way to me.
Turning to Reg, "Are you jabbing me with a spork?!" Stora in hamstermuffin form asks angrily.
Lol that's why I chose it
Lol thanks feather