Like I have all this editing to do but I can honestly tell you editing 43 pages is a total drag. But I should probably do it soon before it grows. This is only the beginning! And btw someone told me the beginning was slow... -.-
1. You can use my name, doesn't offend me if I look stupid, I do that enough myself. 2. I didn't mean the battle as I specified afterwards. 3. I lost track of where this was going.
I agree with whoever said it was slow, it's ever so dull, there is hints of a good writter, but your too repetative & your vocabulary is a little short. You need to vallicate the reader into what u want the story to be, but all in all it's.... Ok, your too full of yourself which comes across in your writing & hey it's not an exam, what's with the endless formality?
I'm really glad you said so because now I'm quitting writing all my pieces of ****. Thanks for helping me make up my mind (no sarcasm intended)
you asked for feedback, you can't quit what you "love" everytime someone gives a bad review, you take it on board & change your mistakes.
I don't "love" it at all. It's a way to kill time. And I will never change my writing style so I threw it all away. Let this thread die
A way to kill time isn't productive, you were never goin' to be a good writter if you dent even like doing it. (sorry but I had to reply)