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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010.

  1. He was sick and phsychotic. He cut the womb of his sister out of her and ate their baby cuz he though he was Zeus and the baby in the womb would end up being Athena
     
  2. ..........ok u can use the other name on pg3
     
  3. Calligenia is used in chapter 5. Daughter and head guard of Aphrodite? Love interest of Adrastus
     
  4. Is he the fire/conjuring Mage cause if that's him that's my guy
     
  5. Calligenia isn't a Mage. There are no mages in ancient Greece and calligenia is a girl
     
  6. Hmm mayb I'm thinking of a different story I posted a person in wierd anyway I still like ur story pwease don't stop
     
  7. That would make sense since I never asked for people to make characters
     
  8. Now I remember it was for gloomis new thing
     
  9. What can I say it's in the name
     
  10. Yes! I found it!
     
  11. Sorry conq >.> forgot to bump it.
     
  12. No I was going to be okay with it dying. I just wanted irate to find it
     
  13. Dammit you got my hopes up lol
     
  14. About to post Chapter 6
     
  15. Edited to have pictures for the chapter number :D
     
  16. You FINALLY posted a new chapter!;)
     
  17. Yup. I've been busy but I've also been debating whether or not I should even continue it. No one reads it