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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. Its about a boy and his dog
     
  2. Sounds nice, post it!
     
  3. Ok ill post it then bump it to a new page. Nothing but bumps should be below it
     
  4. Tie me away
    A puppy cavorts in sunny fields. 
    A yap and nip that never yeilds. 
    Companion's fate at sight unsealed. 
    Two friends, to friends, eternal pact. 
    Two merge, to merge one soul intact. 
    Endless world to youths distract. 
    My fuzzy friend your voice is shrill
    Your stubby tail is never still
    There is a place for you to fill. 
    A friendless void within my soul
    Which mommies cannot see. 
    My mate to dwell inside this hole
    Which daddies cannot be. 

    So lay your head upon my lap
    And guard my dreams from fears
    In time for after-morning nap
    With fur and floppy ears. 

    Two years have past how fast youve grown. 
    A pup no more the time has flown. 
    And better friend i've never known. 
    Two rhomp, to play on daddy's farm. 
    I fear. You keep me safe from harm
    With howl and growl my hound alarm. 
    We run in golden fields of grain. 
    We roll in mud amidst the rain. 
    And play child's games that aren't sane
    At nights my tiny bed is filled
    With lumps of fuzzy you. 
    At sharing warmth you're plainly skilled
    And moreso as you grew. 

    Lay your head upon my lap
    And guard my dreams from fears. 
    My arms around i wont unwrap
    My friend of passing years. 

    Tomorrow i am turning ten!
    I tell you with excited grin. 
    Anticipation churns within. 
    Responding with a wagging tail. 
    You huff a sigh and then inhale
    Then trot ahead along the trail. 
    The woods retreat and home appears
    With every step my birthday nears
    The decade's song within my ears. 
    Envision piles of gifts stacked high. 
    I wonder what i'll get. 
    In daydreams ten year olds can fly
    Your back i absent pet. 

    Lay your head upon my lap
    As i turn out the light. 
    No gift like you will i unwrap
    So long as you're in sight. 

    The special day has gone and been
    A month or two i have been ten
    And daddy's built for you a pen. 
    He told me there you will be tied
    He said you cannot stay inside
    But then relented when i cried. 
    Friends eternal we will be
    Always stay beside of me
    Untethered strong and roaming free. 
    Keep nose up front and tail behind
    No matter what they say
    No chain nor leash will ever bind
    Never tied away. 

    Lay your head upon my lap
    I'll pull away the thorn. 
    Guard me with your growl and snap
    Then greet me in the morn. 

    Toss and turn i'm feeling rough. 
    With growing symptoms is the cough. 
    You lie at foot i'm hot enough. 
    Dad suggests you not be near. 
    He says towards sickness doggies steer. 
    But those are words i will not hear. 
    You comfort me truth to tell
    In this viral swarming hell
    My throat is raw and eyeballs swell. 
    The doctor cannot find a cure
    Sometimes it does not matter. 
    I watch your nose push through the door
    Im never getting better. 

    So lay your head upon my lap
    Protect me from the storm
    Await with me my final nap
    And guard my shaking form. 

    The darkness nears my loyal friend
    The illness grows it will not mend
    I ask you wait until the end. 
    My arm's too weak to pat your head. 
    You whine and nuzzle me instead. 
    In days or weeks i will be dead. 
    I can't get up go out and play
    No matter that you wait and stay
    So sickness wont tie me away. 
    When morning comes and i don't wake
    I fear that you will cry. 
    Away my body they will take
    And never tell you why. 

    Lay your head upon my lap
    Bring comfort to my dying
    Please don't fear my father's strap
    Ignore my quiet crying. 

    My son has cried his final tear. 
    My son has nothing more to fear
    It is a corpse you huddle near. 
    Stupid dog my son is dead
    You need not guard his tiny bed. 
    Come along with me instead. 
    Come with me don't bare your teeth!
    Above his bed we'll hang a wreath
    Once you're outside and he's beneath. 
    No longer will you find a place
    To taint within my home. 
    You'll be outside in open space
    With barely room to roam. 

    So lift your head from off his lap
    Outside is where you'll stay
    Around your neck i'll place a strap
    Forever tied away.  
     
  5. Im actually surprised the forum let me post all that at once
     
  6. That's so sad! I feared the dog was going to die, so it took me completely be surprise.  This poem is an amazibg peice of art, you could win awards with it.
     
  7. Thx lady!!! I never typed it up for obvious reasons before tonight but i wrote it long ago
     
  8. Wow....um wow!!! That was amazing!!! Ok contest over that poem wins!!!!! XDp
     
  9. A friend of mine got mad at me. She was in a restaurant when she read it and cried in public.
     
  10. Lol thx reapel!!
     
  11. I really regretted using such a formatted rhyme scheme about halfway through writing it.
     
  12. Great poem 
     
  13. Thx ww!! Srry it was so long.