The poetry wars sign up

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. EasyCheese you are the best!! xD
     
  2. Wow. I started reading today from page 1 till now. You are all good. I'd join. But I can't write worth nothing. But I would be a great judge.
     
  3. Easy. Loved your last one. Awesome. Awesome awesome.
     
  4. Shadowstream. Expert.
     
  5. No... Intermediate. Note I focus strongly on metaphors and symbolism.
    Here's a sample poem and u can decide if I'm intermdediate or expert:
    I am a bird
    without wings
    drowning in an ocean
    an ocean of tears
    my own salty tears
    Why her? I am drowning!
    My own tears
    I cry out to you
    but my cry is unheard
    and you are holding her hand
    Help me please!
    My own tears
    I reach out a hand
    but
    she is more important now
    I sink lower
    lower

    lower

    my own tears
    my vision is going black
    but I see your face
    one last time
    a cruel mask of stone
    one I used to kiss
    I used to love
    but she is yours now
    O cruel world!
    My own tears, take me!
    A bird
    without wings
    and a broken heart.
    ~Shadowstream, 2010
     
  6. I can't decide shadowstream, which do u want to be?
     
  7. I've got an idea! Should I make a seperate thread specifically for poems? It would be alot more organized!
     
  8. Ooops i forgot all about the ranking stuff. Hope i didnt interfere too much last night.
     
  9. I guess im experienced. Tho im a better painter than a writer.
     
  10. I would say u are experienced shadow tho if ur uncomfortable w the format go with intermediate for the first competition.
     
  11. You didn't interfere at all distance, this is still practice!
     
  12. Ive actually thought about setting up a pal room for poetry tag. Poetry tag is where one person tags someone in the room and gives them a topic. No prewrites are allowed and when the composer is finished he tags another person. Theres no ranking or rating and it gives u less time to write but ive been in chats like that before and it is fun and challenging
     
  13. yawns

    Yawn yawn yawn,
    Oh how I feel like a pawn.
    Yawn yawn yawn,
    Look at the rain on my lawn.

    Workin all day,
    Just so I can play.
    Oh how I'm a pawn,
    Yawn yawn yawn

    The world around me,
    Rainy and wet,
    Oh how it surrounds me.
    Yawn yawn yawn

    Back against a wall,
    I can hear the devil call.
    He says to sleep,
    To fall down deep.
    I try to resist,
    But I'm only a pawn.

    Yawn yawn yawn


    -ALinkToDie (AKA ALinkToTheFuture)
     
  14. I think that turned out pretty sick for being my first poem
     
  15. Ready for a poetry attack!!!
     
  16. Nice idea distance! That sounds like loads of fun! I had tons of creativity going for me today, and during school I wrote three poems!
     
  17. Can we have a topic for tommorow dinner time
     
  18. Or is there allready a topic
     
  19. tomorow dinner time topic is: mysterious, anything mysterious
     
  20. Yay! Poetry is da funness!