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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. Distant horizons oceans apart,
    Flashing a smile light in my heart,
    Standing in place lost in the blue,
    Lost in the sky, and thinking of you.

    Dreaming away when nights get too long,
    Singing my way through symphony's song,
    Finding what's real, finding what's true,
    Finding myself and thinking of you. 

    Hearing the tinkle of cascading rain,
    Discovering passions i cant restrain,
    Out on the parkway in mountainous view
    Watching the distance and thinking of you.

    Oceans waves awash in the spray,
    At the dawn and the dusk and the dark of the day, 
    Drawn to your eyes, engrossed by the hue,
    Always, forever thinking of you.  
     
  2. Distance, that was amazing!
     
  3. I'll Love You Forever

    Don't ever forget, what you said to me, 
    On the day we first kissed, by the trunk of our tree,
    You said that you'd love me, year after year,
    You said that you loved me, and that was my fear.

    Commitment had scared me, mistakes of my past.
    But you said our love was one that would last.
    And I loved you so deeply, I had to believe, 
    So I helped make our goal, one we could achieve.

    We married four years, right after that day.
    "I'll love you forever," is what you still say.
    And year after year, that promise you keep,
    From when we awake, to when we both sleep.

    But time had to pass, we were over the hill,
    "I'll love you for always," is what you say, still.
    You smiled your smile, and my eyes had shone,
    And for so many years, I was never alone.

    Then one rainy day, in a hospital bed,
    "You know I still love you," is what you had said.
    "I'll meet you in heaven, and thanks for the ride.
    I'll love you forever. I'll be at your side."

    7/19/10
     
  4. Lasting Love
    Our love, our lasting love.
    We stand united, we cannot be divided.
    Our love, our lasting love.
    Even when the skies are gray or blue, my love will always ring true.
    Our love,our lasting love.
    Always together, you and I, we're just like stars with an endless shine.
    Our love, our lasting love.
    I give you roses every week, your sweetness is what I seek.
    Our love, our lasting love.
    Like the roaring of waves, your lips upon mine is what I crave.
    Our love, our lasting love.
    Like a ray of sun you make me smile, as I hold your hand I ask you to stay awhile.
    Our love, our lasting love.
    And even when we're at death's door, I promise I'll seek you forever more.


    I know it's pretty corny. But I tried my best!
     
  5. Distance, that was outstanding, and irin, reading that a second tine still makes me tear up.
     
  6. Irin and kimber both excellent! I hope we dont have to vote on these. Its way too close!
     
  7. Okies I'm back!!' I know it's kinda late but I'm gonna post my war poem!! As I said before I really dislike this topic so not some of my best work!! XD
     
  8. Have you ever seen blood run
    Flowing in thick streams 
    Like rivers on the ground
    And heard the dying screams 
    That echo all around
    There's no glory here it seems

    And gunshots fire on
    And on the ground they lay
    Paying with they're lives
    A price they shouldn't pay
    Dying though they strive
    To meet the light of day

    Have you ever seen a boy
    Skin cold and pale as ice
    With blank and glassy eyes
    Caught in wars cruel vice
    While his sobbing mother cries
    His unjust sacrifice 

    And the battle carries on
    For these machines of war
    Will never stop the blood
    Till bodies wash the shore
    And earths consumed by flood
    And still they'll thirst for more 

    For war makes monsters of us all
    Even the strongest hearts
    Can be poisoned by hate
    When the thirst for killing starts
    And they're bloodlust never sates
    Until their soul departs

    But this can't continue, it must end 
    For if it doesn't more shall fall
    The dead will lie upon the street
    The injured on their knees will crawl And we'll 
    trample them beneath our feet
    War will bring the end of all
     
  9. Damn!! Messed up the last part 
     
  10. It was worth the wait reapel! Im gonna have to crash soon. Gravity adjuster is kicking in. Lol
     
  11. LadyM. If you want it to come down to a readers vote then I can put up some polls on the site
     
  12. Wow guys!!! All of you outstanding poems!!!!! XDXDXD I might have teared up!! ( ) XP
     
  13. lasting love:

    When she turned 82
    she'd had enough
    So over a chicken dinner she said,

    "For 60 years now I've lived with you.
    And I think you would know me by now.
    But this chicken dinner has shown me the truth,
    You never really cared for me anyhow.
    I've made you this meal time and again, and each time you know what you do? You take the dark me, and leave me the white. You take what I love for you."

    Her husband set quietly and just looked at her, then slowly he put his fork down.
    "it's true I've taken the dark as you say, but my love the rest is not true. You see it's the white that I love the best, and I was leaving my best for you."
     
  14. Yea link, that would be great, and kimber, sorry I didn't see your poem, that was your best yet I think, easycheese, your poems are so different, but are also some of the best!
     
  15. Nice one reapel! Really good!
     
  16. Ok two things regarding the site

    1: LadyM message me via the site telling me what you want the polls to have on them.

    2:check out the new banner (note may not be clearly visible on an iPod or might lag it to much to see)
     
  17. Ok link, your the best! I all check banner out tomorow, sleep time! (I mean it now!)
     
  18. Lol get some good sleep

















    and I know I am
     
  19. My Queen

    My queen, I loved you, But it is time to end our love
    We never see each other
    And we were never meant to be togeter

    My queen, You Loved me, But never fogived me
    It is time to break apart
    From my body, a part

    My Queen We Loved each other so much
    But our love wasnt eternal
    I felt it was infernal

    P.S I made this poem in 5