The poetry wars sign up

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. You might have a gift with free verse...
     
  2. maybe i guess im just used to rhymes
     
  3. Really good kimber!!! Unique idea!!! Intersting that neither of you chose to rhyme it!!
     
  4. oh yeah i just noticed that
     
  5. I rhyme sometimes, but I think I write more passionately when I'm doing free verse.
     
  6. Such a sweet agony
    Our humanity, our entirety
    Who are we to question destiny
    We have only our sincerity

    To forces uncertain
    We surrender smitten
    Logic will fail
    As we continue under hail

    A desire so strong
    Is it so wrong
    To follow the temptation
    Damn damnation

    We shall lust and pray
    And wish for the day
    That our desires are filled
    And our senses thrilled

    But we already know
    Soon again ourselves we'll throw
    Into the pit of desire
    Forever and ever
     
  7. Ooh, can I still sign up? I'll say...

    Interested!!
    And experienced!
     
  8. i vote for klassic hands down
     
  9. Um klassik? Amazing!! You get my vote!! I loved the ending!!! And mars!! 
     
  10. I like the free versing and kimberly its got a good message
     
  11. Your poem really holds the truth of Desire in it. This Is by far my favorite out of the desires so far.
     
  12. I challenge anyone who wants to write right now to writing a poem about poetry so that I have inspiration for my hw!
     
  13. thanks klassic. it took me a good four tries to get it into something worth posting. and who was that directed to lady?
     
  14. I'm up to the challenge tonks!
     
  15. Thnks for the compliments lol
     
  16. A poem about poetry.... Interesting....
    I'll start right away!
     
  17. I'm not just saying that do u won't leave, klassic, I believe you've captured the true meaning of desire
     
  18. Well thnks lol