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This is my first ever KAW Story so don't mind me if it's crappy I still tried it...

Ok this is a story of the American Iran war about reports of nuclear weapons in Iran this is the register page and it can also be used for feedback but no SPAM!!

This is how I want it layer out thx and hopefully wish me luck!!

Name:
Age17-35)
gender:
army title:
personality:
weaponmust be a gun, handgun and knife)

thx

 

This is mine:
name:Tom Redknapp
age:21
gender:male
title:sergent
weapon:SCAR-H, GAT, four knives

 

None...?

 

I'm starting a prolugue to start it of and awaiting any players

 

Reborn_ashes is ruby ashes
age 19
gender male
weapon 2 mini UZI one RPG

 

Eddzies_assassins is Edd Zii
age 23
gender male
weapon M5 2x desert eagles 2 knives

 

FX positions availible

 

I'm goin 2 sleep tell rest later

 

Thx ppl and by the way I do chapters in parts like part 1 2, most parts in one chapter is 5