The EntwinedFeedback: Haters welcome

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *IamNotSparta (01), Sep 5, 2010.

  1. please post what you think about my story and pls keep it bumped. haters allowed, I wanna know my flaws. thanks!
     
    #1 *IamNotSparta (01), Sep 5, 2010
  2. Nice story! I like it, can't wait for more!
     
    #2 *lady-marian (01), Sep 5, 2010
  3. I like. Did u go for my idea?
     
    #3 *I_Cr0 (01), Sep 5, 2010
  4. Robin hi, I very much liked the surreal feel of yr story! 2 things tho, if it happens 2 him all the time, why's he scared? I'm blessed 2 have many friends & co-workers who happen to be 'black' & wish the guy @ the end, had been putrid green. You've got talent, keep it up! ;-) Duchess99
     
    #4 Duchess99, Sep 5, 2010
  5. thanks.
     
    #5 *IamNotSparta (01), Sep 5, 2010
  6. good job  it should have more of a plot and characters though
     
    #6 *godofgames (01), Sep 6, 2010
  7. I apply for a main charcater!!!!
     
    #7 *I_Cr0 (01), Sep 6, 2010
  8. Is there more? Lol
     
    #8 *Ipitydahooka (01), Sep 6, 2010
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