iRate rating Title: Endgame Authore: Seth Type: Sci-Fi Rated: 4 General Endgame is an original type of story where you are alwais in the action. The story and character are well used but they should have more personality and role. Due to the fact of the non-existence of any info of the outside world the reader can be carry to a misunderstood of why the caracter play The Game. Time and places As the action the places are all one after the other with no communication between point A and B. The background of the story with the caves and stadium really show that it is like a kind of RPG. Caracters All of them are different but none of them show it by doing certain action. Their past is hidden as if they did not exist somewhere else. To finish The first upgrade place seemed well placed as if it was a special thing but as they got them regularly it became less imteresting feature. The arrival of the stores will certainly bring a lot more to the story if used rarely. iRobijoe from iRate
@Dan and Utho I'll look for them this afternoon when I get back from school and then I'll rate it. iZaln
Can u rate a foot print in the sand? It just finished and the second book to it is on the same thread as it so I just started the second book. So can u rate a foot print in the sand?
Could you do like a summary because i want to read but there to long and i get bored at the first paragraph! Any help please? Cheers
@Lady Thank you, but it's my hardworking friends that are really making this work. Thanks and kudos to all my members and all writers iZ
If you get time do The Forever Forgotton. Didn't add descriptions much cuz it's a kaw story and my first and didn't know the expectations lol. But yeah if you get time. If not I understand.
Hey zaln could u rate my story when it starts? Idk when that will b and don't rate me on spelling I write on iPod and autocorrect sux
Since were being flooded with requests, if you want a story to be rated, we want a title of the story AND the requester to find what page the story is on, and tells us. They can also bump it. We are offering this as a service, and we actually planned to rate at our own pace. We aren't here to hunt down your story through 19 pages, it's you who's supposed to. So either include the page number or bump it. iZ
Story: To Raze or Save Author: Skyler_The_NeoKnight Rating: /5 Genre: Reader's Choice Skyler has created a new, unique story wherein the readers vote upon what happens next. This is something that wasn't in KaW FanFiction until Skyler introduced it. This story is fashioned well considering the author must adapt the story to his readers' choices, giving the reader the feeling that they really took part in the story. The grammar is fair, but overall it is bearable. The main character remains undiscovered and not fully revealed giving the wonder factor. Also, there are some pretty funny parts, thus the recommended age to 13+. All in all, this story has strong potential, and could develop into something bigger than it already is. Awesome story, keep it up Skyler! iZaln iEnterprises™