Checkmate

Lovely



But that's more funny

 

I liked it keep up the good work

 

It sucks

 

Jk it's amazing

 

I love it but the book more

 

This isn't ur poem iv read it b4

 

Lier...

 

I love it, grammar check is needed but it is quite good.

Simplistic and straight to the point, and dancing around your morales of valor.

I really like it 

 

I love the poem. Very descriptive and captivating. Might wanna get an editor for your grammar though, no offense. It would really enhance your poem's presentation.

iZ

 

Well not that, but the middle, but kk.

iZ

 

That was... Brilliant. I don't know what it was, but that poem just found itself into my favourites. And trust me when I say, it's an exeptional thing to be getting praise from me xD.