Instructus Iuguolus (Trained Killers) Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CoS-Dillybar, Aug 20, 2010.

  1. #1 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 20, 2010
  2. Awesome Story dilly! Love it!!! :-D
     
    #2 *Lily_Bard (01), Aug 20, 2010
  3. Thanks poddy :-D . I'll post another chapter tommorow :)
     
    #3 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 20, 2010
  4. Love it!

    iZ
     
    #4 Nlaz, Aug 20, 2010
  5. Cool!
     
    #5 *Utho (01), Aug 20, 2010
  6. I might post another chapter tonight. Just to kick it off.

    Thanks for the support :-D
     
    #6 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 21, 2010
  7. Chapter 2 up :)
     
    #7 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 21, 2010
  8. Great story so far! "Otho" is very cool...
     
    #8 *Utho (01), Aug 21, 2010
  9. Lol 
     
    #9 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 21, 2010
  10. What, the ranger guy? Ya he's not bad... I prefer mateus myself.
     
    #10 *Lily_Bard (01), Aug 21, 2010
  11. Yeah but still Otho is a BEAST!
    Cause he is me!



    Mwahahahahahahaha
     
    #11 *Utho (01), Aug 21, 2010
  12. Lol. Haven't heard much feedback guys :-( tell your friends please.
     
    #12 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 21, 2010
  13. I will when I'm done mercing. But it's only the beginning. Also, u in iWrite?
     
    #13 *Utho (01), Aug 21, 2010
  14. No I'm not
     
    #14 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 21, 2010
  15. Kill
     
    #15 *jordanthesooter (01), Aug 21, 2010
  16. ?
     
    #16 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 21, 2010
  17. Talk to Bastion about it. You get a lot more readers in iWrite btw
     
    #17 *Utho (01), Aug 21, 2010
  18. Chapter 3 up
     
    #18 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 22, 2010
  19. Odd, Dario is also in my story as a villain lol.

    iZaln
     
    #19 Nlaz, Aug 22, 2010
  20. Lol
     
    #20 CoS-Dillybar, Aug 22, 2010
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